Great scene. Camera manages to lend itself well to the oneiric atmosphere they were going for, as does the lighting. Charlie makes for an absolutely gorgeous succubus and, there's no other way of saying this, has the best dick-sucking face. Also their tongue is the sexiest thing in this, fuck. Dialogue and structure is good. If I had to nitpick, it'd be that the transition text is a bit clunky, but overall it's amazing work.
Before watching this video, Google Succubus if you haven't heard of it before. Just the idea and the acting out of this video from Charlie got me hard let alone the naughty things that happen during the entire video! It was so hot watching the creampie as it took the weary traveler just a couple of seconds until he told succubus Charlie, "I'm Cumming!" as Charlie pants and starting breathing heavily like the horny succubus she is. Just absolutely worth the buy, enjoyed every second of it. Can't wait for the return of Succubus Charlie!