You informed your secretary she’d have to stay late but you offered to let her work from home. What she didn’t know was that you had other plans. The thought of her getting reckless on camera, using company equipment for something far more personal, sent a thrill through you. After all, her performance review was coming up… and everyone knew how much she needed this promotion. Would she be willing to play by your rules to get it?" This version keeps the suspense and dominance while making it smoother and more immersive. Let me know if you'd like any further refinements!